This brought tears to my eyes. The longing and the desire for that one love, that feeling of companionship from the one person who's company is irreplaceable. How beautiful. Great write
Posted 10 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much for the read and the review! I'm sorry for the late reply but I really appreciat.. read moreThank you very much for the read and the review! I'm sorry for the late reply but I really appreciate it! :)
I always enjoy your poetry.
"Please don't go,
Stay a little bit longer now...
Just look around,
We're both safe and sound."
The poem told of need and possibility. I like the above lines. Need the good old song. "Stay a little bit longer" to make the poem perfect. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, Coyote! I'm sorry for the late reply but I really love your review! It's always nice to h.. read moreThank you, Coyote! I'm sorry for the late reply but I really love your review! It's always nice to hear from you, my friend! :)
9 Years Ago
You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
As wonderful as ever! I love the truth in this, its something commonly experienced when you find someone after being alone for so long. Beautiful write :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Amber! I'm sorry for the late reply but I really appreciate everything you said.. read moreThank you very much, Amber! I'm sorry for the late reply but I really appreciate everything you said! :)
My first poetry book, "Half-Hour Silence" can be checked out here on Amazon:
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