More Questions for God

Unexpected.

I don't get it.

I've never,
Felt so cold before.

It flows through my veins.

Like vicious pain.

I always thought,
That I had more.

And why,
Can't I die,
Before my time?
Maybe it would ease my mind.

And I,
Try to lie,
But don't you know - 
That I don't really want to go?

Will this last?

Or will this pass?

Will I ever be the same,
Just like before?

A simple plea.

Do you hear me - 

When I scream,
That I can't take this anymore?

And why,
Can't I die,
Before my time?
Maybe it would ease my mind.

And I,
Try to lie,
But don't you know - 
That I don't really want to go?

One day,
I'll pray,
And you'll say,
I'll be okay.

But is this all my fault?

Until,
You will,
I'll be still.

But is this all my fault?

Just let me know,
Because I don't really want to go.

Reviews

[Wandering Minstrel]

you write with such love and heart,..it just flies off the screen

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you, my friend! You are way too kind! :)

[Amber Lily]

Aw... this really captivates the feelings you go through when getting into a fight with your other half. It just hurts, and you explained it well. I could feel the pain as I read it, which is a sign that you wrote this well :)

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Wow! That's an interesting take on this! It does fit into words! Thank you for finding that, Amber! :) you are so insightful and I appreciate everything you say!

[Amber Lily]

Thank you! It is always a pleasure to read your work! :)

[Frieda P]

Reads as song lyrics, to a very sad and frustrating tune...sometimes we feel as though we want to give up, then we write poetry to ease the pain, nicely pen'd Michael.

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

I couldn't agree more! Thank you as always, Frieda! :)