It's been a while since I posted something new. This is just a little piece that I think will be making it into the poetry book I've been working on.
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Oh this is such a real piece of writing, where the love is hard to understand, where is it? it's still there but gone at the same time, I do like it you repeat a several lines in here, it could be a great song... on acoustic guitar. I feel the heartbreak in it, the yearning the need, to have her near... beautifully expressed my friend.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for being so supportive and inspiring, Elisa! :)
10 Years Ago
Aw, thank you! keep on writing, I shall keep on reviewing and following you. :)
I felt my heart breaking as I read this. This is so beautifully expressed & penned. The desperation & need for the other person just leaks through in each line you wrote. Oh the aching it brings. This is amazing. I expected nothing less from you of course.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Kesha! I'm glad I could return the favor and break your heart this time! ;)
I feel a great loss here, either to the great unknown or just terrible circumstances due to to a break up...the longing is palpable. It's lyrical to read, nicely pen'd Michael.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Frieda! I always appreciate all of your support! :)
I can really relate to this- I feel as though everyone goes through this at one point or another. I'm glad to see you writing again :) Great ink!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Ally! It feels good to be writing again :)
Oh this is such a real piece of writing, where the love is hard to understand, where is it? it's still there but gone at the same time, I do like it you repeat a several lines in here, it could be a great song... on acoustic guitar. I feel the heartbreak in it, the yearning the need, to have her near... beautifully expressed my friend.
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for being so supportive and inspiring, Elisa! :)
10 Years Ago
Aw, thank you! keep on writing, I shall keep on reviewing and following you. :)
My first poetry book, "Half-Hour Silence" can be checked out here on Amazon:
http://www.amazon.com/Half-Hour-Silence-Letters-Lifelines-1/dp/1511995882/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1454360414&sr=8-1&keywo.. more..