The above lines can stand alone as a perfect poem.
"If love's the ending,
You have in mind,
Then place your hand,
Inside of mine.
If love's the ending,
You have in mind...
Then trace your name,
Right next to mine."
I enjoyed the kind emotions and need of the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you for everything, Coyote! And you're right, this poem is like multiple poems in one!
Oh wow. This lady who owns your heart sure is lucky. You are a truly amazing poet. I enjoy each word you write. I am extremely happy to have you on my friends list. I loved each image you painted. Just wow. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I truly can't thank you enough! :) You're such an inspiration! And I'm extremely happy to have you a.. read moreI truly can't thank you enough! :) You're such an inspiration! And I'm extremely happy to have you as a friend, too!
And there's no real lady... Just the speaker's lady haha :)
10 Years Ago
Aw well thank you! But you are the true inspiration! :) & ah ok I see! :)
This is beautiful. Your work as such a natural flow and rhythm, that part way through I scrolled back up to see if this was intended to be lyrics! lol You are truly a talented individual.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much! I appreciate all of your amazing support! :)
I can hear this being made into a beautiful song. I loved the word-play at the end, "If love's the ending,
You have in mind, Then trace your name, Right next to mine".
Although it's a longer poem, you said so much in so few words, especially in the stanza: "I'm on your edge. Don't make me fall. I found you once, And I lost it all".
I was getting emotional reading this, because the words seem to come to life in this piece; the emotion. Such an original poem!
~ Feather
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much for all of your support and inspiration, Feather! :)
My first poetry book, "Half-Hour Silence" can be checked out here on Amazon:
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