Even If She's True

And she was...

Like an evening glow...

Like the whitest night...

Full of ice-cold snow... 

And a frost-filled bite...

Never on her own...

But always all alone.

Turn away-

You know you can't stay.

She'll leave you this way-

Even if she wants you now.

Try to refrain-

When she's calling your name.

She'll drive you insane-

Even if she wants you now.

And she was...

Like a wolverine...

Like an endless spiral... 

Full of dizzy dreams...

And a touch so fatal...

Always sharp and keen...

And always so damn mean.

Too much pressure-

You should've known better.

You'll never get her-

Even if she wants you now.

Try and see-

She's making you crazy.

She'll keep telling you maybe-

Even if she wants you now.

And she was...

Like a pack of fighting wolves...

Like a nightmare angel...

Straight from Catholic School...

And so soft and painful...

Always fierce and cruel...

But always beautiful.

Turn away-

You know you can't stay.

She'll leave you this way-

Even if she wants you now.

Try to refrain-

When she's calling your name.

She'll drive you insane-

Even if she wants you now.

Too much pressure-

You should've known better.

You'll never get her-

Even if she wants you now.

Try and see-

She's making you crazy.

She'll keep telling you maybe-

Even if she wants you now.

Reviews

[tressa]

a very nice rhythmic poem....and i love the subject. its so strange the games that people play with each other....

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you, tressa! I'm glad you like the subject. People can be strange.

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful descriptive poem...:)......................

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)................

[Diana]

And she was...
Like an evening glow...
Like the whitest night...
Full of ice-cold snow...
And a frost-filled bite...
Never on her own...
But always all alone.- Someone's a frost princess...love this edgy description.

"Turn away-
You know you can't stay.
She'll leave you this way-

Even if she wants you now."- Such a poignant refrain. How we wish we could stay and have others stay with us... Fear of loss is greatly felt.

So glad you sent me a read request.

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Wow! Thank you, Diana! I always appreciate your reviews!

[annabellee]

This is great. I really liked the repetition, would make a good song.
Well done :)

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you very much for the review!

[annabellee]

you are most welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow i can so relate to this...i was with a woman who was like this...not because she meant to be but because life had weathered her to the point that she became like a snowstorm in july...and just as unpredictable.

really like the verse here.

jacob

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Thank you, Jacob!