A dying memory

Fun is fun and, done is done. Everyone dyes but there light forever shine on.

You may be forgotten like a penny in the sand. Drifting away to faraway lands. I see you in my dreams and, in my head.

You are a dying memory. Fun is fun and done is done. You are forever and, always in my heart.

Author's Note

My first time writing a poem. So if there bad grammar try to ignore it.

Reviews

[Margaret M.]

This is a good start! I like your imagery and emotion. This does need editing (what doesn't?) but do continue writing! I only started writing poems in January, so I'm no expert myself. I suggest reading as much good poetry as you can find, and writing every day. Best of luck!

[Alice dreams]

thank you.

[Maria]

Loved it, nice job in writing this

[Alice dreams]

thank you for the support and love. I hope you will continue to love all of my future work.

[Maria]

Definitely, look forward to it. Keep them coming.

[Erudite]

Interesting. Sounds like someone close to you may have passed on

[rowan.taylorrr]

i really enjoyed this. well done!!!

[Alice dreams]

thank you. :)

[wordman]

forever and always till the end of time your memory will live in my mind