Running around and singing

A little song I wrote. I hope to put it to music some day but for now this is all I have.

Look at all the people, bleeding, screaming, look at everybody crying, all their tears. You know, this is our only chance to make it right, and tonight [Tonight].. We dine in hell. Very well, for because of us, their plans fell, fell to the ground, they'll take them back [take them back].. on that-chosen-hour, mark my words [mark my words], they'll take them back.

Running around and singing like we never have, running around and singing like it's new. Running around and singing, because of you, running around and singing [running around and singing] like we never have, running around and singing, that's our plan. We'll stop them with our voices, I'm sure we can, we're just running around and singing, not alone.

Well anyway, like before, we're running around and singing some more, like yesterday, and everyday before, lets sing some more [sing some more]. Well hey, if you got nothing-to-say, just sing some more [Sing some more]. Be happy, and sing.

Running around and singing like we never have, running around and singing like it's new. Running around and singing, because of you, running around and singing [running around and singing] like we never have, running around and singing, that's our plan. We'll stop them with our voices, I'm sure we can, we're just running around and singing, not alone.
 

Author's Note

Please comment, and give tips, I'm only a begginner.

Reviews

[better off]

i think its cool, me will it's awesome written, like it alot

[DarkkxVoid]

Very good at least I liked it XD I just myself think it could be a little longer it seems only like a 1-2 minute song at most but other than that I loved it good work.