Lonely

Lonely

A Poem by Mcmacpolla
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I don't know

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I come home night after night feeling like nothing I want to sit in the corner and cry and then I remember I have you, then you left and I have no reason not to cry anymore. 

© 2011 Mcmacpolla


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nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 13 Years Ago


you could work on the lay out
that is needed
Like

I come home
Night after night
feeling,
like nothing
I want to sit in the corner
cry and then i remember
I have you,
then you left
therefor there is no reason
not to cry anymore

But the emotion is there,
and that is most important
though its sad :(

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 26, 2011
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