Our Song

Our Song

A Poem by McEltic

~~~
A billion soul-mates
in a black abyss
the only sound possible
is singing
~
One song each to sing
one soul each
to cling
~
Two souls
emerge
~
Once your songs
sing together
~~~

© 2018 McEltic


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'Our Song'
McEltic,
'A billion soul-mates
in a black abyss
the only sound possible
is singing'
This was a lovely opening for your poem. In the sometimes darkness of life it is possible to find light.
If we are paying attention to others. Who will we click with. It is in the extending of our own selves to others we come across. What a joy to 'click' with another. To find another to sing with!
Beautifully done.
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 5 Years Ago


................I have no words......my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


That song that gets sung together and finds that common melody is the most beautiful serenade that one could wish for- love it🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


McEltic

6 Years Ago

You bet... and it sings throughout each and every molecule of our combined being. Try not to lose fo.. read more

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McEltic
McEltic

London, Canada



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