The Girl Who Breathed Backwards, Chapter 1

Chapter 1.

  The room was still, but moving fast. She saw flashing lights at the corner of my eye. "Honey? Honey are y-" but then i heard no more. She was running in a pitch black room with scares all over her. What was she running from? Then she heard a shocking sound of screaming.

A year later

  She stared at the sun just going down. It had been about 1 year since the.. accident. The last day of summer was a hard day to enjoy. Clouds started to form. The annual rain on the 31st of Autumn was about to happen. She grasped the railing walking up the stairs, feeling a little dizzy. She jumped right on to the bed, wishing this never had happened...

Author's Note

I actually think this is good!

Reviews

[May]

@TWISTED NIGHTMARE Ikr its so short... yeah the first one should be i thought. Ok thanks means a lot:)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

it is short but yes a really good start will be sure to keep reading ...