T.T.J.I.M.Y.

poem.

im never letting go

i wish every second of breath was shared within the distance of your own

you inspire nerves in my brain

to start working

and pumping

and create thoughts

that revolve around your being

 

days spent in deep conversations

that left us speechless

after using every word in our vocabulary

we had nothing left to say,

that was explainable with words

but the looks

of those eyes

created sentences

oh so self explanatory

 

its not a crush

its not a love

or an obsession

its an intriguement

you FASCINATE me.

You!

your persona

and you've been ripped apart from me

from one day to the next

it was over

 

now the question is

should i hold on with all the strength i have

or let go mindlessly

i wouldnt know which one hurts more

i wouldnt know which one hurts less

either one would burn like hell

 

but little by little i try a piece of each one

a little slice of pain

a reminder that you're fading

while im waiting

for u to return

your leaving.

why?

was i that big of a bother?

i apologize for trusting you.

sweetie.

 

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your words describe so well the wonder of another to impact our lives. That deep movement that is so fascinating. Your ending passages carry such a bittersweet feeling, as the longing resolves to a darker destiny. Beautiful!