Nectar of Words

I have penned a letter for you my darling,

each word in it has been woven out of love

and carries in it the fragrance of your memories.

The ink of my thoughts poured out the nectar of words

I shall ask thou to consume this nectar

and allow it to dissolve in the taste of your emotions 

for only then shall thou experience my love.

Reviews

[micky]

Amazingly beautiful.....i love it

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Beautiful.........!!!!
passionately written..........
i loved it!!!
p.s. consider these(personal opinion):
2nd line: woven "with"/"in" love
5th line: "thee" instead of "thou"
7th line: "thou shall" instead of "shall thou"

[mayankverma]

Thanks Pushkar. yea these technical corrections might be needed. Thanks a lot :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome............!!! :) :)