Lethal Dosage

just playing with the alphabets

Lost within

Somber rage,

Day  bloomed and died.

Reviews

[Amber Eve Surdam]

Overwhelmingly beautiful. I enjoyed your poem. It was short but effective. Great job.

[Mayank]

Thank you, Amber for the kind words.

[Rene Salinas]

The gardener in me thinks that when you get your seeds and most I think will be safely around the 98 % germination never plant with the intentions that the plant would not make it. That would indicate a mental state that is not in line with growth. Sombre rage is certainly one of those mental states. How is the day to bloom? From conception to manifestation there is an intrinsic relation, plant -- cultivate and care.

This seed here dies before germinating...

Thank You.

[Mayank]

Very well, my germs are hallucinating lot now a days. The reason is mentioned there, I hope you spotted those alphabets.

[Rene Salinas]

The allusion to LSD? IS that what you mean? I did but as a recovered addict not sure that you want me to go that road.... Happily delve into the subject if you want me to. I will say however that Dimethyltryptamine would be way stronger and well dangerously good if that's how you are looking at this......

[Mayank]

Haha! I hope you are recovered, lets not dwell on this subject anymore.