Very short, but powerful and insightful. Everything dies at the end of life, no stopping it. No matter how much or how little we have, no matter how good or how evil, we all suffer the same fate at the end.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Very true, this is the how our fate works. Did you notice and the light was seen after L.S.D. First .. read moreVery true, this is the how our fate works. Did you notice and the light was seen after L.S.D. First alphabets in those 3 lines.
This is a moody piece. It blends well with "Day bloomed" at the end, however. It adds a sense of light amidst darkness. As for the rest of the poem, the words you used were quiet descriptive & i got the full picture without you having to try too hard to show me.
I have mixed emotions about this, I don't know if I should accept the fate that it is giving me, but I also want to see some light shown upon these dark words. You blend them well, a little bit of hope in that last one, "day bloomed.." but then as usual, "and died." Great job.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
It was an experience, psychedelic one. I am not sure how many connect with it.. but it's more like a.. read moreIt was an experience, psychedelic one. I am not sure how many connect with it.. but it's more like accepting that anything which alive today will die tomorrow.
It takes a lot of talent to convey complex issues and imagery in so few words, but when someone can do it well, they hit it out of the park. That's exactly what you did here. Amazing job!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much, your review meant a lot for me :)