I have fallen in love with this! May you describe the muse further to me? The delicacy with which you present such dark imagery is delightful. Thanks!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Willow, there are many things that you need to get rid off. However, they are not things l.. read moreThank you Willow, there are many things that you need to get rid off. However, they are not things like cloths, accessories etc. They are related to the mind, when you are lonely and days are not so good, you can shred those things and feel little light. Like the snake, shredding his old skin.
9 Years Ago
And it sings now clearer to me than ever. I love I think!!
Hi Mayank :)
There is some really vivid imagery in this short poem - leaves a strange image in my mind that I don't think is going anywhere soon... Food for thought.
Kindest regards, Debra
Woah. This poem is so powerful, and for the first time, I have no idea how you did it. This poem was so good, I'm at a loss for words. Great job, I loved it!
-Elisa
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Elisa. After reading this, I can say my job is done :)
I need to pick up on micro poetry man. My verbose and neurotic brain cant seem to squeeze in so much into so little :/
Great work, really impressive it seems to me!