Butterfly

My friend was bold

Her skin was cold,

She floats like a butterfly

Disappears, in the blink of an eye.

Reviews

[rashu]

how nicely you penned your thoughts just in 4 lines that's really appreciable..
i am not such big to judge others but what i feel is you could haave added a few more lines to it making it more affective but that's only my personal opinion so maybe i did not understood what u wanted to convey..
other than that these lines really have a deep meaning..
thanks for sharing:)

[Mayank]

Thanks for the review...