Butterfly

My friend was bold

Her skin was cold,

She floats like a butterfly

Disappears, in the blink of an eye.

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

Gracefully beautiful. xoxo

[Mayank]

Thanks Jess!

[Ruth]

Not much to be said except vividly concise and packs a punch xo

[Mayank]

Thanks for the review poppy!

[Oyindamola Shoola]

This is a short and great piece...I love the way you Present death...

[Mayank]

Thanks for the read and review :)

[xDalliance]

That's a beautiful comparison to death. It's very good!

[Mayank]

thanks Jharna :)

[Azure]

i'm sorry for your loss but thank you for sharing this mournful yet beautiful poem great job
and sorry if i'm wrong but it seemed to me as if you were speaking of someone who had passed on

[Mayank]

Thank you read, I am happy that I made you feel this way but this is purely imagination and I am as happy as Buddha.

[Azure]

lol ok :) great piece though especially for one purely imaginative it speaks with strong emotions

[hardeep sabharwal]

I think most fascinating things or persons disappear soon in life or lose their fascination
a nice read

[Surya pradha]

made me think if it had some inner meaning. an interesting, short piece.

[Mayank]

Thank you Surya.... everything carries meaning

[Alex Boyd]

Wow this is one of those poems where the audience sit and think. Pondering on what this could mean though simply still complex in thought process... She ran that much we know but from what, who, and why??? Its all a mystery.... I love it........

[Mayank]

Thanks Alex, I am happy that it tickled your brain.

[Patricia]

I hate it when that happens...great little piece that makes the reader reminiscence. :)

[Mayank]

Thanks Patricia...

[Simran Kewlani]

I can't interpret short poems, Mayank. They confuse me. *pouts*
Why you do this?

[Mayank]

It's fun yaar..

[Simran Kewlani]

You enjoy when I'm blank? -______-

[Mayank]

I would be happy if you reply back, you know what I mean :p

[Simran Kewlani]

I actually don't know what you mean. Care to share?