Random Thoughts

Just thought to post my random thought...

That thought which slipped from my head, Spilled on the floor, lay wasted... I picked up another card, I hope its ace of spade. I see the world dull and hazy, I wipe my spectacles. Not sure of what I am doing, I am lost in my own verses.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I like the imagery mixed with the sense of confusion, of trying to gather thoughts and get on with the game of life.. for random thoughts it is well expressed my friend.. I like everything about it.. the flow, the phrasing, and the comparison.. great job!.

one thing I noticed..
"it's"---I think needs an apostrophe and would put (the) after it.. and an (s) on the end of spade(s).. just my opinion for what it is worth...
(I picked up another card, I hope it's the ace of spades.)

[Mayank]

Hey April, thanks for the read... yeah I didn't notice the grammatical error there.

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome.. it is always a pleasure.. glad I could help :)

[Sindu]

It's crazy sometimes.. may be brain restarts and takes few seconds to reboot.. and this happens ;)
That time when everything seems so different... still the same.
Or may be you wore your specs over your lenses.. I do that :P
Nice few lines.

[Mayank]

Thanks Sindhu...

[Surya pradha]

really is random, good though... liked it!

[Mayank]

thanks Surya

[Avinash]

sometimes when we are clueless about ourselves, everything looks hazy. Could relate with it..

[Mayank]

Thanks for a read