Random Thoughts

Just thought to post my random thought...

That thought which slipped from my head, Spilled on the floor, lay wasted... I picked up another card, I hope its ace of spade. I see the world dull and hazy, I wipe my spectacles. Not sure of what I am doing, I am lost in my own verses.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Shows the spiral of thought, once grasped...whoosh...then layered with myriad other visions xo

[Oyindamola Shoola]

Simple.... Yet it reflects certain things that happen in reality... Well penned

[Mayank]

Thank you again :)

[Afraa]

Very creative this is. A perfect example of people's everyday lives. I can relate to this.

I applaud you!

[Mayank]

Thanks Afraa for the review

[Meraki]

Hehe that's how I go about my days, not sure if it's a good thing or a bad thing but it works. I just like this poem.

[Mayank]

Thanks Meraki, we feel the same.

[Gurleen Saluja]

Magically and intelligently knitted with words. Thanks for sharing :)

[Mayank]

Thanks Gurleen for the review.

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome.

[Skai Rain]

Short and sweet. It seems it can be interpreted in many different ways. That or I have no idea what I am talking about... thank you for sharing.

[Mayank]

Thanks Brit

[Alex Boyd]

I must say short but very enlighten and how you end it with "Not sure of what I am doing, I am lost in my own verses." Just poetic justice for the whole piece simply because as a writer we do have millions upon millions of thoughts and sometimes them thoughts becomes a labyrinth. Not knowing how to escape but escape we must in order to forge a grand masterpiece. Keep up the writing

[Mayank]

thanks Alex!!!

[June Fowler]

Powerful words!......Thought which.......lay wasted..... yah random thoughts often get wasted unless they r not captured on paper in black n white!

[Mayank]

Thanks June for the read and review.

[Azure]

how interesting i love the way you describe forgotten words and losing your self in random thoughs

[Mayank]

Thanks Azure!

[Briana O'Connor]

Ah, the sweet sensation of being lost in one's mind. Very deep piece you have scribed here. Nice write.

[Mayank]

Thanks for the read!