Random Thoughts

Just thought to post my random thought...

That thought which slipped from my head, Spilled on the floor, lay wasted... I picked up another card, I hope its ace of spade. I see the world dull and hazy, I wipe my spectacles. Not sure of what I am doing, I am lost in my own verses.

Reviews

[Amber Dawn Agin]

I really enjoyed your poem, very well done. I love the feel to it and overall tone. "I see the world dull and hazy" "I am lost in my own verses"

[Mayank]

Thank you!!!

[Roshan Nair]

Seems like the opening to a good screenplay from the looks of it man. nice write!..wonder what would come if you continued! :P cheers

[Mayank]

I leave many of my writings incomplete... (deliberately)

[Gee]

Sweet.I get that dull and hazy whenever I open the oven door to retrieve the road kill roasting,specs fog over,can't see a thing.Enjoyed the read.

[Mayank]

hahahaha! thank you, anyways.

[Gee]

My pleasure

[Debra]

I love it!
Can almost see a cigarette in your hand and a shot of whiskey on the table.

[Mayank]

hahah! you got it mate. Thanks for the review.

[Debra]

You are welcome

[Patricia]

"I am lost in my own verses" blew my mind amazing!

[Mayank]

thank you for the review!

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

I have felt this way many times and I loved how you seemed to describe how I feel perfectly. I really liked how you said: "I see the world dull and hazy, I wipe my spectacles" my favorite part.

[Mayank]

yeah, more or less that came because I wear specs :p

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

Oh I see haha : ) I like it anyways

[Mary Christabel George]

Mind is such a volatile existing thing.
Multiplication of thoughts expressed well.

[Mayank]

thanks Mary!!

[Mary Christabel George]

Welcome Mayank

[Frozen Eyes]

Mind and its games.. did you catch hold of another one yet?

[Mayank]

I did and made another poem, which was updated here as Butterfly

[Aprille]

That's what happens everyday. Once grasped, then lost...

[Mayank]

Very true! can't help it..