The verbs and adjectives you used here painted a beautiful picture while still fitting into the 5-7-5 of a haiku. The word choice here is impeccable - I especially like the last line. Great haiku! :D
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I love writing in haiku, it is my favorite type of poetry.