Our atoms

Our atoms came from within
the hearts of stars;
so why are you burning out in
bellies and bars,
drowning your corona in sorrow,
when you could be Alpha Centauri,
birth charismatic constellations,
and awe bodies and minds
with incandescence and spark?

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a simple & caring & understanding way to compare how some seek a spark in a more organic setting, while others go to a scene of chaos and/or muddling noise. I thrive in nature, but most people would hate my existence in wilderness, with no access to "action" and "excitement"! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Maxwell Ryder]

The wild is marvelous, and so are your words, Margie. I would love to be in it, but I usually just have to dream it.

[barleygirl]

I've been incommunicado for a month due to severe winter (as severe as the California coast ever gets! snow on ridges makes my cabin about 40* day & night!) People think this is horrible, but actually I love it. It's hard as s**t, but I love it.

[Maxwell Ryder]

I know. I came to your profile a couple of times to read some stuff, but it was down. Welcome back. We missed you.