Just the dopamine

Written November 5, 2014

I got excited: I projected, I channeled, I pretended I'd won. 

I felt like the kid I used to be, dreaming on the sofa, asleep; 

If only for a second inside this dream did creep, 

A former self of me. Or maybe it was just the dopamine.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

hmm fun with bio-chemical napping eh!? just curious if you had written this with different line breaks? have to smile at the acerbic attitude on winning :)))))) ... being married to a wonderful woman who never looses ... i can relate ...... arrrrrrrrrrrrgh! ;)
E.

[Maxwell Ryder]

maybe I wrote it, then I lengthened,
but only for visual effect. I am not afraid
of two lines (or clauses) within one, as long as
I stay consistent.

[Einstein Noodle]

i am putting that in the back of me noodle Max ... have not tried that technique in a poem yet :)

[Maxwell Ryder]

I think it’s more than a noodle, Einstein, and more like a dumpling 🥟 jk, thanks lol 😆

[Einstein Noodle]

:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))