Unmoored from Heaven’s Breath

Unmoored from Heaven’s Breath

A Story by Max Meunier

onward looking nature’s sprawl

welcomes ingress

flawed acceptance

thoughts eternal

unmoored from heaven’s breath

unravel forces unseen

casting urgent

a moment’s ire

unto deafening depths

of untold familiarity

 

© 2016 Max Meunier


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Beautifully put. Love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Max Meunier

8 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words. i truly appreciate it
a prime example of "brief but very powerful". masterfully done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Max Meunier

8 Years Ago

i appreciate this very much. i tried to stay true to the essence of the feelings involved. thank y.. read more

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Added on August 15, 2016
Last Updated on August 15, 2016
Tags: max, meunier, poetry, free verse, despair, suicide, freedom, death