Doomed to survive

My struggling to survive poem for English

Doomed to survive

Curse me I cry

Doom me I sigh

You may do such but you shall never cut me down

With every word and every whisper

I can hear what you say

From one end to the other I am double to the triple sure

That with every word I am doomed to survive

I may stand strong and tall

But inside I am dyeing crying and in Bewildering pain

And in the inside I am doomed to survive

So help me I plea and don’t say what is wrong

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

[Sami Khalil]

"That with every word I am doomed to survive

I may stand strong and tall

But inside I am dyeing crying and in Bewildering pain

And in the inside I am doomed to survive"
The title along with the poem are all great...Thank you for posting...:)

[Nick.B]

Interesting poem you've managed to pin here, it has that "dark" feeling...great job, love your style

[Darkening Shadow]

I think you might over use doom. Maybe try replacing it with a synonym. Great Write!

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a wonderful piece and full of soul (;

[Jan]

I almost started crying ;-; Amazing gloo gloo~ (Yup, that's your new nickname!)

[Kadessa (Kaddy)]

Beutiful my luv.