Chilled

Frozen
Into time
So fair, so cold, all alone
I reach for your hand as it slips away
As you descend deep into the winter blue
 
Come in
Still so cold
Warm your bones next to mine
Rest your soul in the comfort of my arms
The pain will fade deep into the winter blue

Don’t be afraid...the blue will fade
The fire will die...the sun will shine on you

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you seem to have adopted a confident, nurturing role for this one, aahhhh...

[Nishant Gupta]

nice lines read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE"

[Jessica M.]

Resting a soul on comfort, such an original yet perfectly fitting metaphor. I wonder about the ellipses in the ending couplet, I can't decide if they add or detract from the words. The blue fading and fire dying is very interesting imagery, makes you think. Nice write.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem!

[angelina neves]

very beautiful!
~"I reach for your hand as it slips away
As you descend deep into the winter blue" - wonderful image!

[James K. Blaylock]

that would made a killer song. i love that last part.

Don't be afraid, the blue will fade
The fire will die, the sun will shine
On you

keep up the great writes.