Louisa

Louisa Point - A Picturesque Spot situated on the Hill Station Matheran linked with a Tragic Past.

Mountain’s covered in the Mist have the Secret to tell you, if only you can Listen’,

Dark Clouds’ Hovering above, crying every day, when they Gather here for Sojourn’,

Having Witnessed which was never meant to be, the Story Untold, Lost forgotten’,

Destiny or Free Will, Nobody Knows, but that Last Whisper, still lingers, un-smitten’.

 

Waterfall, trying harder, to erase tragic imprint’s, turning Milketh only to fail and Mourn,

For the heavy Load of that Very Last Tear, rolling down the Valley, left no stone Upturned;

Dilemma it was, Choice had to be made; whether to just sit and enjoy the Nature, Smitten’,

Or, Allow the Mountains’to speak out, hearing the Story, as they Turn Darketh like a Demon.

*Thunder Strikes*

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhh! I am also carried away in your bliss, The way by which you described these pieces sounds Innate...
Lovely usage of words

Awesome

[Mavericks]

Thank you again. Nature is very inspiring.

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What to say.......

I enjoyed the Elizabethan styled language of this poem and the alluring imagery that you have described throughout the poem.

A very unexpected piece of writing. Very different to what you have published previously. Nice work!

[Mavericks]

Thanks Doodley, You are the Best Critique and a very Good Friend. Alway's so Good to see you in Review Section. This Poem is Very Melancholic, I agree. Elizabethan? Probably. Haven't read her yet though. Anyway, I did tried to break with the Norm, and write something out of my Box. And, Here lies this Poem. Thanks for Dropping by =)

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Elizabethen language, Mave! Not a writer called Elizabeth! Smh......

[θεά ]

Rick should give up being a deck.

[Mavericks]

It's all start with Yourself. I talk Straight, I Walk Straight. Somebody need's to Correct her Posture. =)

[θεά ]

Why are you giving me a theory of your non-evolution, baboon? Go eat your malai kofta.

[Mavericks]

Because, Evolution went wrong somewhere in Your Case. Anyway, It's none of my Business. =)

[θεά ]

Amazing use of uppercase though! So arbitrary, just like your idea of humor.

[Mavericks]

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[θεά ]

No more "keep dem coming", Mave? You disappoint me, tut, tut, tut.

[Mavericks]

A Wise man One said Nothing. *Namaste*