Liberation

And, the Death was nothing, but a Mile Stone;

Had he Crossed the Veils of illusions, having  touched the Philosophers Stone?

He Found HIM, But lost World;

And Forever rested in Bliss, in the Arms of the ONE!

Reviews

[NANCY DON]

Whose the one? God? Alter ago? Gay love?

[Mavericks]

Seek and ye shall Find!

[Nailah Baniti]

Peace Roy, if ever, I admired a poet, it' would be you :) I love how you write, I love the right in your words. I love your write :)

[Mavericks]

I am Flattered. You are so Kind, My friend. You gave so many Accolades, that It's very Hard to Digest them all in once *smiles*.

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Well, Mave.....what can i say?

A very thought provoking write; a simple structure but a very interesting piece of work.
Liberated from life......finding God in death.......

A great start, my friend. Keep them coming.

[Mavericks]

Thank you So much my Friend! Glad for Reviewing it. Yeah, tried to keep it simple. Don't want to make it sound Pretentious or something! Will try my best improve the Flow, in the Coming ones. Thank again! Love reading your Poems too. You were always an Inspiration. Imagine! (John Lennon)

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Hahaha. Easy on the sychophancy, Mav!! Good luck!!

[Mavericks]

Can't be any Politer than that, My friend. Don't Confuse my Humbleness with Sycophancy! Haha.