A TRIBUTE TO HER...

for all those who still dont know what a woman is...

Some call her an elegant Gladula

Others call her a Daisy

Yet some say she's a sweet kitten

Her looks drive me crazy!!!

She's meek and frivolous

Far from being pragmatic

A dependent heart and mind

Has no reason and tactic!!!

You don't need her suggestions

It might lead you to disaster

Just show some love and sympathy

She'll perform her duties faster!!!

Oh Silly man!!!!

Your eyes are blindfolded

You are a rotten soul

Gates of your mind are bolted!!!

Look at her... Delve deep...

You'll find will and perseverance

Courage and Conviction

Her Selfless Love and Patience!!

She rises above all odds

Supports through thick and thin

She'll shed buckets of tears

Yet face you with a charming grin!!!

If you still don't get my words

Let her be a Mystery

Lead your life the way you want

Your foolishness is now History!!!

Because she's not a kitten

She's a valiant Lioness

Who catches the cunning prey

Doesn't mind your being the King, I guess!!!

She's a land unexplored

Her secret is clandestinely hidden

An inseparable part of this creation

She's but and only a Woman!!!  

 

Author's Note

hmm... not much to say but i might edit it later... for now you check it out and do tell me your reviews... :))) And bdw the rhyme scheme is inspired by "Tate Morgan" and the rest is all original... :P

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like this poem. It was good. It made me think of how a woman can be a soft and then turn vicious. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

[maryjaneuy]

Very well written. A very good tribute to all the women out there! I don't think that is anything to change or edit. For me, it's good enough. keep on writing.

[Simple_mee]

Its cool! Portrays the kind of Woman i admire. Much the same thoughts i had before writing my poem "Dont mess wth me" !!
Its really good, cud do with some editting but on the whole the msg was well delivered !! :)