I AM... :)

its a delightful poem about me not my best but its sweet n its me!!!!

I am a cool breeze of air

I am a jewel; splendid and rare

I am the Sun that is warm and bright

Yet hides itself in the silver moonlight!

I am the creamy icing on the cake

I am your reflection in the lake

I am a star you will never see

I am a bird flying freely

I am a strong girl in the weak

I am bold yet sometimes meek

I am the only flower on the hilltop

I am success not a flop!

I am the song that nightingales sing

I am the colorful vibrancy of Spring

I am the sparkle in the eye

I am a rainbow in the sky

I am the silver lining on the cloud

I am crystal clear without any doubt

I am a smile, I am joy...

I am the child's favorite toy

I am full of gusto and spice

Lovingly tasting my life's slice!!!!

Reviews

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How uplifting..it is good to one yourself..how else can you love someone else if you don't love yourself..wonderful

[Shalini Dinesh]

This poem shows how much of self confidence you have and how much you love yourself...Good luck in the contest..

[deeps]

This is so wonderful
I like this write alot.

[MagiCrystal]

Hey you, you are all over this piece.. yes you !
I love it.. it is fabulous to read this amazing flow.
A slice of life.. outstanding. ~

[Princy]

This poem makes me feel special and lively from inside. I think it may make a lot of girls feel like that, thats the beauty of this poem we can relate to it. =)

[Nayan]

Resembles the poem "I'm not a Girl Next Door" :) I loved this toooo!

[shayne]

this is wonderful! I love it

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is well written and beautiful. I like the flow and the ending was very good. I like your format and movement of the poem. A excellent poem.

Coyote

[Simple_mee]

A b'ful write...so like u! ;)