I Never stop trying...

never ever give up... fill your mind with positive thoughts; have an "i can do it" spirit n believe me it'll work wonders!!!!!

I walk, I run,

I jump, I fall 

And I get hurt

Still I stand up again

And continue my efforts!

I search, I fumble,

I rummage, I mumble

And I never find the thing

Yet I don't grumble

And start it all aver again!

I work, I slog,

I study, I strive,

And I sometimes flunk

Don't get to the top

So what? 

There's always a next chance!

I talk, I shout,

I scream, I protest,

Yet no one pays any heed;

So I again clear my throat

Ready to get myself heard!

I try and try

Have fun and enjoy;

Sometimes I do fail

Yet I don't cry.

Then happiness chases me,

Things become finer,

And there I emerge

As an unbeatable winner!

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

never give up no matter what! great message in this write!

[Poetic Beauty]

This a poem that make us see that we should keep going, keep striving for our dreams even if no one is listening. Make our voice heard. Great write

[James Paulin]

I like this inspirational poem for every reason it brings to mind about being positive. I think being negative is all to easy and leads nowhere. Very nice!

[Senseless whatever]

Fantastic. Always pushing never quitting. All works out in the end. Great message to live by.

[jhed]

wow, seems you really never give up..this is a good poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. We can't give up. Effort must keep our hope and desire to succeed alive. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Nayan]

Hey Harman, your writes are an inspiration to people to be hopeful and strive for better always! In this poem too, you share your strong belief in Hope as you did in your poem "Fight Back".

[Simple_mee]

Cute n nice....though lacks a certain flow but that doesnt diminish its beauty.

[Dev]

Never Give up !! Good theme to work with.. Technically I found nothing wrong just the flow of the poem is a little off in between but other than that very well written