I Never stop trying...

I Never stop trying...

A Poem by harman kour
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never ever give up... fill your mind with positive thoughts; have an "i can do it" spirit n believe me it'll work wonders!!!!!

"
I walk, I run,
I jump, I fall 
And I get hurt
Still I stand up again
And continue my efforts!

I search, I fumble,
I rummage, I mumble
And I never find the thing
Yet I don't grumble
And start it all aver again!

I work, I slog,
I study, I strive,
And I sometimes flunk
Don't get to the top
So what? 
There's always a next chance!

I talk, I shout,
I scream, I protest,
Yet no one pays any heed;
So I again clear my throat
Ready to get myself heard!

I try and try
Have fun and enjoy;
Sometimes I do fail
Yet I don't cry.
Then happiness chases me,
Things become finer,
And there I emerge
As an unbeatable winner!
























© 2010 harman kour


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This poem reads just weird. It's like it wants to have a rhythm, but you're insisting on making it not have one. I like it, but I think it would be much improved if you rewrote it either sticking to the rhythm that keeps trying to develop or just abandoning the half-completed structure altogether.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked this poem. Nice emotion and everything. It also helps me want to better myself. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cool, just my motto in life to... win or die trying
very very inspiring and an excellent poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a very touching and inspiring write.
I Like this it's a very enjoyable read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love this it is inspiring to me to never give up and you ill have a positive outcome i like this oh yeah and good job cuz some people are lazy and like to plagerize(how ever you spell that lol)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Your work is often inspiring and touching, especially this one.
How you think can affect how you live and certain outcomes.
Good work. :)


Posted 14 Years Ago




More and more people should be optimistic like you, great poem!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so encouraging, for times will always come to knock us down... We show what's inside us by rising up every time... This is victory.. to go on. You express this so well!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is good. I like the way the first two lines of each stanza are written. And of course the message behind the poem. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


that's the spirit!
that's the spirit of a true winner
this boosts up the positive attitude and the attitude of not giving up, keep on striving and never loosing hope among the reader
I love your choice of words
~Aaradhya

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 23, 2010
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harman kour
harman kour

jammu, j&k, India



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