The First Lecture

Her hands were shaking when she entered in the classroom . She can hear words like "Look at her""She's pretty scared""I bet she won't be able to introduce her".
Then the teacher said "Class we have a new transferred student...Emily please introduce yourself to your classmates "
Her heart was throbbing very fast . After a while she spoke "Hey everyone, good morning...I'm Emily Cornell ...a-a-and ... Thank you." And then she hastily sat on an empty chair .
Emily is a shy girl , she's an introvert .She had lost her self confidence a while ago due to an incident happened( She saw a murder of pigeon by a cat yesterday......Seriously don't laugh kid's mind is innocent)
Last night she was screaming in her sleep because of the incident.
"Hey Emily , my name is Mike" a kid sitting on the next bench said.
"H-HI" She said in a very low voice .
"So  I guess you would like to copy old notes...Here you can take my notebook"Mike said while smiling.
"T-Thanks "
She hesitately opened the notebook and then she started laughing out loud. Mike also started to laugh and almost felled from his seat.
In notebook there was a cartoon of Mrs.Nugget saying "Class pay attention".
Then suddenly Mrs.Nugget said in high voice
"Class pay attention"
After hearing to that , Emily - Mike started to laugh aloud.
"You two get out of the class" Teacher yelled at them.
While in the corridor , they were still laughing.

Author's Note

*ignore grammer mistakes
*give reviews to help me write better
HAVE A NICE DAY :)

Reviews

[Stacey]

First of all, I would like to say thank you very much for sharing this story with all of us. As the reader, it definitely grabbed my attention. It had great fluency and fluidity to it, so well done for that. I did not notice anything really gramatically incorrect. I was actually reading the story with the screenreader. I found it very pleasant to listen to. The only thing I noticed, and it's very small, not a big thing at all, but the word corridor does not have an E at the end of it. That's the only thing I noticed and the reason was that my screenreader pronounced it weird so I read it by character and noticed that way. But like I said, very minor, very small, and doesn't really affect the story at all. It was still very good, just wanted to let you know. But again, great job, and keep writing.

Stacey

[Maitrayee Dadhich]

Thanks a lot ...And next time I'll not make spelling mistakes. :p

[Stacey]

No problem, just a small error I saw, that's all. But the most important thing is that it was a good story, which it was, so great job.

Stacey

[Maitrayee Dadhich]

Thank you so much :)