May dreams be brought that I might reach... The gentle strains of midnight speech.... And frozen stars that gild the forest floor.... and this is where I want to be no more.....
In my opinion Maumil its a lovely piece, the first line takes me to a land i often dream of, it does not exist but its in my head and that's what counts, the second line has me thinking of laying in bed at night and just whispering to a loved one of everything and anything, those frozen stars on the forest floor its the imagination in this that stretches my imagination and i love that feeling, this is where i want to be no more, indeed i don't, i want to be in that forest in my head that does not exist but is beautiful to see, so here we have four lines that create a magical story, i would tell your friend to continue writing as soon as possible for he/she has a gift to give us, thank you Maumil :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much Richard for the beautiful review you left...he would be very pleased :)
In my opinion Maumil its a lovely piece, the first line takes me to a land i often dream of, it does not exist but its in my head and that's what counts, the second line has me thinking of laying in bed at night and just whispering to a loved one of everything and anything, those frozen stars on the forest floor its the imagination in this that stretches my imagination and i love that feeling, this is where i want to be no more, indeed i don't, i want to be in that forest in my head that does not exist but is beautiful to see, so here we have four lines that create a magical story, i would tell your friend to continue writing as soon as possible for he/she has a gift to give us, thank you Maumil :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much Richard for the beautiful review you left...he would be very pleased :)
Hi! I am a 17 year old girl who likes to write. I am in grade 11 ( the system varies from country to country, but anyways). My favorite writers would be Shakespeare, W.B. Yeats, Emily Dickinson, Sylvi.. more..