THIS WICKED LOVE

FOR MY BRANDY MERRY XMAS

THIS WICKED LOVE

SUCH AN AMAZING AND GENUINE FEELING

YOU HAVE GIVEN THIS MAN ALL HE DESIRES

THIS BRILLIANT LIFE

IN LIFE SO CHALLENGING

WHAT MAKES IT WORTH LIVING WITHOUT THE CHALLENGES WE GIVE EACH OTHER

THESE FAKE PEOPLE

THOSE WE CANNOT STAND

WITH THEIR MASKED HAPPINESS AND PAPER DOLL SMILES

THESE EXCITING OBSTACLES

I CHALLENGE YOUR ANGER AND YOU MY PATIENCE

BUT WHAT IS GENUINE LOVE WITHOUT CLASHES

THE UNDERLYING BRILLIANCE

A BEAUTY OF PAIN AND SACRIFICE TRAINING FOR THIS HARSH LIFE

THE BRILLIANCE OF HOW WE MAKE EACH OTHER STRONGER

THE DEFIANCE OF OTHERS

OUR ROMEO AND JULIETTE WALL CREATED BY THOSE AROUND US

BECOMING IMMUNE TO THE POISONS OF THE DOUBTERS WHO WISH TO TEAR US APART

THIS WICKED LOVE

A LOVE THAT HAS GIVEN US THE MIRACLE OF A CHILD

A LOVE THAT KEEPS TESTING MY PATIENCE

A LOVE THAT PUSHES TO DEFY YOUR ANGER

THIS IS THE BEAUTIFUL SYMPHONY THAT IS US

THIS IS THE RELENTLESS FORCE THAT DRIVES IN ITS SHADOWED ANGELIC WAY

YOU ARE MY WICKED LOVE

YOU ARE MY BRILLIANT LIFE

YOU ARE MY REAL SOUL

MY EXCITING OBSTACLE

MY UNDERLYING BRILLIANCE

 

YOU ARE MY BRANDY

Author's Note

I KNOW IM NOT A POET BUT GO EASY THIS IS FOR MY GIRL ;)

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

I like how you show the parts of love that may not be all flowers and roses but is the reality of two personalities coming together. Sometimes that brings clashes, but it's all part of the relationship.

[Kelsey]

Welcome back, Matty. One wouldn't know that you weren't a poet by reading this piece. A very beautiful one indeed, it's plain to see that it's come from the heart. You did a beautiful job with this poem, I really enjoyed it and how you painted the pictures within it. Nicely done. :)

[Hester Vane]

Great Job Matty. I like this because its simple and sincere, im not poet either, but i i think this is great because its got heart. Merry Xmas.

[lys..]

i really enjoyed reading this.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

lovely, my only suggestion is not to write in all caps. This means you are yelling.