The year is 2067, terrorism and terror cells have become stronger and stronger over the last fifty years...Still after all this time our government remains ignorant to the problem and denies that there is a problem...With the US at an all time low and a dwindling budget, lucrative oil prices, and the decline of our grip on the middle east the worst possible thing has happened...The signing of the New Soviet treaty has gone from a fairytale to harsh reality..With the rejoining of Korea, dictator Sun Pac Yun, the genius behind what has become a Korean powerhouse has also spread his reach of power to the once fallen Soviet Union and along with the alliance of most of the powerful terror factions in the Middle East, Yun now sets his fist of power towards the Americas...After investing in such a powerful Navy and countless amounts of ground troops, blood-thirsty and ready to kill without hesitation, Yun has America ready to fall to her knees....Yun is right about one thing...Our arrogance has cost us our power and with war immenant for the first time on our soil, America has become the hunted...Now our highest military advisors turn to one hope left for the good of democracy and freedom from a ruthless dictator....Secretary of Defense Karl Daniels calls it the ace up his sleeve...A project that not even the president knows about...Only Daniels and a handful of his advisors know of this project...A project Daniels calls a great risk but one that is needed in such desperate times....We now call on the Gaurdian Angel Project...
EEEEEEEEEK! This seems like it will be amazing. I hope you stay on top of the ball. This is not subject matter you can BS through. You have to know stuff about stuff to make it authentic...sadly this is the first of your book I'm reading of yours and I don't know how you write but if this prologue is anything to go by...his should be great. Go luck :)
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12 Years Ago
Its very funny you say that because its something that I thought about for along time...The whole te.. read moreIts very funny you say that because its something that I thought about for along time...The whole teetering on the real life scale...But as you will read you'll see that it will lean way more towards fiction and sci-fi...I would say Matrix meets Wanted meets X-Men kinda mixture with a touch of reality based instances..Thank you so much for the comments and I hope to keep hearing from you Mia...Thank you so much
12 Years Ago
It's a pleasure and I will definitely be following this story!
This doesn't sound like something I would have read about a year ago, but since taking my first year of uni (international relations), I find what you've written to be incredibly thought provocative. It sounds truly compelling and your use of words is inspirational. I'm excited to read more of your work once my uni year is over. :D
alright caught my attention. impending war, all of americas enemies joining forces and a secret project. intriguing.. i hate to be the grammar police, but guardian is misspelled. the story is definately solid
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Jack and I hope you keep reading and give me insightful reviews...This is about to get pub.. read moreThank you Jack and I hope you keep reading and give me insightful reviews...This is about to get published but I don't want to give that a go until I get the best opinions from fellow writers....I have a big fanbase who love certain characters and certain parts but they aren't writers...I want to make sure this is going to be worth the effort...Keep following Jack and thank you very much :o)
Wow! This provokes so many questions and so much to look forward to. You have to wonder what will happen, since that's one of many points of a prologue, and this made me do just that. Wonderfully done!
Thank you very much Kelsey...I'm trying to get the best input from the best writers before this proj.. read moreThank you very much Kelsey...I'm trying to get the best input from the best writers before this project gets published...I have alot of fans that love this project but theyh aren't fellow writers..I figure before I give the go for this to be published I want the input of other writers...Hope to hear more from you Kelsey and you Keep up the good work :o)
12 Years Ago
You surely will, I look forward to having time to sit down and get into this project of yours, it se.. read moreYou surely will, I look forward to having time to sit down and get into this project of yours, it seems very interesting. :)
Sorry guys, one of the guys that was reviewing my prologue made me stumble across a big mistake...He talked about the "ace up the sleeve" of Secretary Daniels' when if you read more into it he actually argues against the project...I should've wrote that its Susan Mansfield's ace not Daniels...Sorry guys
I'm intrigued. I'm interested to see what the "ace up his sleeve" is. I just watched the Avengers and it reminded me of that at the ending...
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Ya know Damien I thank you for bringing up such a good part...See you caught a mistake that I haven'.. read moreYa know Damien I thank you for bringing up such a good part...See you caught a mistake that I haven't caught until you just brought it up...The "ace up the sleeve" should be Susan Mansfield's not Secretary Daniels', who as a matter of fact once you read more into it argues against the project....Thank you for showing me that error and thank you for the review buddy I hope you keep following..
12 Years Ago
I will keep following here and there for sure! Glad to have helped.
I am very impressed :) This sounds very interesting, and I like how you use issues that America is dealing with right now (the arrogance of people) and have applied it to a more futuristic setting. Great job! :)
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Chelsea very much....I hope you keep following and give me your detailed opinion on the ch.. read moreThank you Chelsea very much....I hope you keep following and give me your detailed opinion on the characters and the story...Once we find an artist this will be published so I need the true feelings of the readers Thanks again Chelsea
12 Years Ago
No problem. I completely understand where you're coming from. I feel the same way about my novel, bu.. read moreNo problem. I completely understand where you're coming from. I feel the same way about my novel, but no one seems to want to read it :( Anyway, you're welcome :) Keep up the good work.
EEEEEEEEEK! This seems like it will be amazing. I hope you stay on top of the ball. This is not subject matter you can BS through. You have to know stuff about stuff to make it authentic...sadly this is the first of your book I'm reading of yours and I don't know how you write but if this prologue is anything to go by...his should be great. Go luck :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Its very funny you say that because its something that I thought about for along time...The whole te.. read moreIts very funny you say that because its something that I thought about for along time...The whole teetering on the real life scale...But as you will read you'll see that it will lean way more towards fiction and sci-fi...I would say Matrix meets Wanted meets X-Men kinda mixture with a touch of reality based instances..Thank you so much for the comments and I hope to keep hearing from you Mia...Thank you so much
12 Years Ago
It's a pleasure and I will definitely be following this story!
My name is Matt, I live in eastern Pennsylvania....I have been working on the same writing project for the past ten years....Everybody loves it...I have also been trying to get it out there to the pub.. more..