Alright guys....For those of you who have been fans of The Beginning of Hope...
This is for those of you who have been fans of my suprising story of Rain Hope Barnaby...The Beginning of Hope....I need some really good ideas for villians to aid Tomb and Jenni Hastings in the destruction of Hope....If you have good ideas anything at all as long as its nothing goofy or silly, I would love a name, a type of power or talent, they can be any type of character except for vampires, zombies, or werewolves LoL They could be some secret military experiment, something satanic, somebody that is enhanced with some kind of chemical...Anything you can think of.....The most wicked names and character descriptions will be used in my story...Maybe some as even unlikely allies....Just give me some of your best ideas if you can....Thanks alot guys!!! You have been the catalyst to me wanting to keep going with this story with a smile because of the great and informative reviews you have given.....Thank you all sooo much I appreciate it!!!
You guys have all given me excellent names and ideas I love it!!! I am sooo sorry I haven;t been on here in like three months it upset me soo much....But now I have my internet back!!! So be prepared for more great reviews from me and I'm sorry to say the story of Rain Hope Barnaby has to go on the back burner for now....I have to concentrate on my Gaurdian Angel Project...
i havent read your stories, but i can give you some advice:
a power hungry being. the one who steals power from you leaving you powerless and then kill you. about the name i dont know i kinda have problems with naming my characters.
hope it helps.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
I like the concept of course and who doesn't...Thats the only problem...Its been done many times whe.. read moreI like the concept of course and who doesn't...Thats the only problem...Its been done many times where a character has the power to take other's power from them...But its a great idea
12 Years Ago
I always admire that concept and now that i think about this its kinda common... I have this idea in.. read moreI always admire that concept and now that i think about this its kinda common... I have this idea in mind...hmm.. one that wants the cover the earth with water...his an evil merman...
I don't know about the name, but a scientist is very classic... Which your story is not... What I try to do is surpirse people, so, turn a classic into something new. Try a women scientist, or a golem one... Or maybe your scientist has bright green hair because of an experiment... Just little things that will change your entire story
Love the name!!! Kinda has the sound of a name for a Honda though..But it is very good...Very origi.. read moreLove the name!!! Kinda has the sound of a name for a Honda though..But it is very good...Very original and very cool
You can write about a psycho scientist, who is just a genius. And creates such drugs to destroy selected woman in different ways. May be because he got deceived by his wife, whom he loved more than himself, and her separation from him made him to suffer a serious kind of brain disorder. Also, you can name him, Dr. Hradawk Miller.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
That sounds alright....Although the scientist thing has been done so much before...Green Goblin, Doc.. read moreThat sounds alright....Although the scientist thing has been done so much before...Green Goblin, Doctor Octopus, Jeckyl and Hyde...to name a few....I like the name though...It shows character...And the brain disorder thing, I would say maybe has a breakdown...But anyways...Its a good idea...
12 Years Ago
I am really sorry for the common idea, but when you mentioned, ' anything you guys can think of', i .. read moreI am really sorry for the common idea, but when you mentioned, ' anything you guys can think of', i tried my level best to think and help. And i am not at all offended, so don't worry and be happy. Lol.
No thats fine....I will still use it...The name is great and thats the hardest part of creating a vi.. read moreNo thats fine....I will still use it...The name is great and thats the hardest part of creating a villian of hero is having a powerful name...The scientist thing I like but he has to have some kind of invention that makes him more powerful or just as powrful as our hero...Any
12 Years Ago
if u want fiction, then may be the character can invent a little thing, which can control the flow o.. read moreif u want fiction, then may be the character can invent a little thing, which can control the flow of tides, by means of the lunar and solar eclipse, which can actually be a good source of destruction in your story.
12 Years Ago
Tidal power is both destructive and a good source of energy. Everybody needs energy to power their .. read moreTidal power is both destructive and a good source of energy. Everybody needs energy to power their Ghost Robots.
My name is Matt, I live in eastern Pennsylvania....I have been working on the same writing project for the past ten years....Everybody loves it...I have also been trying to get it out there to the pub.. more..