Damn you, I love you

this can be taken the wrong way. I love you Amy with all my being, remember 'My love is a whisper' and you cant take this the wrong way ( I hope).

DAMN YOU, I LOVE YOU

 

Damn you, I love you

I’m lying in bed

I can’t sleep

For you

Are on my mind

It hurts too much

 Because I don’t dream

Of anything

Or any one

I need you on my mind

Damn you, I love you

I’m sitting here

And writing to you

Instead of saying

What must be said

But I just can’t say

Those words

Those small words

With Amazing meaning

Damn you, I love you

Damn you, I’m sorry, but I love you

 

Reviews

[snapstache]

So cute,
But...to help the flow a bit, in the third line, I'd start a new line after sleep and make "For you" a line by itself...just a suggestion it helped me read it when I did it. Other than that...FANTASTIC! Now for the good :)
It was so cute and the emotion flows well its something we all feel at time so its a good topic. Awesome write.
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[Ardeth Lane]

Adorable! This is uttery adorable! (I figured I'd say adorable since everyone else was saying 'cute'. Haha.)

[Joy Lynn B.]

Aw this is the cutest thing I've read in a while!

[indieRokker]

This was very cute poem
keep up the greeat work

indie♥

[Aiko Chan]

This is good. I, along with millions of others, can totally relate to this. I love the frankness of the title and repeated words "Damn you, I love you."

[xsighx]

oh i love this so much, its so cute!
you are an amazing writer, truly, if only i could write half as well as you :)

[Nickle]

this is rlly good...i can feel ur emotion in this poem and i know what it feels like to want to say something but u cant bring urself to say it sometimes...rlly good poem :)

[Alicante lullaby]

lovely,,,i dont think Amy or any girl would take anything so passionate as this the wrong way,,, a true narrative of a lover's feelings,,,

[Amy]

love you this is so good matt it says what you are always trying to tell me so well wonderful