My love is a whisper

I dont really care that it doesnt rhyme. Amy I love you... as always that is a whisper compared to the truth.

My love is a whisper

Of what I really feel

My love is a whisper

Of what I really say

My love is a whisper

When I hold you with one arm

My love is a whisper

When I hold you with two

My love is a whisper

When I kiss you on your head

My love is a whisper

When I kiss you on your lips

My love is a whisper

That the whole world hears

My love is a whisper

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Matthew,

Yes, I know. Quiet, yet so deep and sincere. It is not quiet for any reason other than it is private. It is not quiet because it is ashamed. Just ask. You'll not hold back, but give full report of your love. It is a whisper, yet behind it is the power of a roar. Your love is a whisper of what you truly feel.

I understand.

Wonderful poem.

Best regards,

Rick

[Miss Coral]

1) Poems NEVER have to rhyme. People often think of poetry as having to rhyme, but that just means that they haven't explored all of the possibilities that this form of writing has. Not that anyone does- but they have explored very little.
2) I thought this was very good... sweet and touching in few words.
3) I thought that the repetition was a bit distracting. Not overly so, but it drew back from the poem for me.

Overall, nice job. c:

[Roxie Demonia]

thats such a sweet poem. its so romantic!

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Awesome poem. wow I just love it! nicely put together

[Megg]

Simply beautiful! The end.

[Ardeth Lane]

I love how it repeats! It's an amzing poem, and flows perfectly!

[snapstache]

That was soo cute :)
I don't see anything wrong with it, it flowed well and I enjoyed. Excellent. Keep writing :) I think I read a story next!
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[Orahemae December]

i love the repetition of this poem. it gives the poem a sense of absolute love. a great piece.

[Amy]

one of your most briliant works beautiful i love it more each time i read it i still can hardly believe you wrote this for me

[Dillon Cotter]

Dude this is a great poem. From so much feeling and creativity. This is pretty good.

-Will

[Elise]

I really like this, it's brilliant it all fits perfectly together :)