Hate

This is a poem that walked into my head (like all others do). its about when i was having a hard time at school. I did things i later regretted and i felt worse and didnt want to do anything. so in a sense it killed me. The funny thing is i heald onto it

Hate

Hate is a drug

Hate is a pain

Hate slowly kills me

Hate feels so good

When I make others feel the pain

But hate feels so wrong

When hate finally kills me

And I bring all the pain along

Reviews

[lep010]

True to the point.

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

this is amazing! :) I loved it, this was crazily intense and well written!


good job!

[~eVelyN fAiTh~]

I love your poems. A lot of them have to do with love and pain. There's so much intensity to them, like you've recently had your heart broken before

[Jemma]

Good write. Expresses hate and just how powerful it can be. The way it consumes you and can destroy you. Easy read. Simple and well projected.

Ps.

Lol glad you joined the site. I'm the one that recomended it from the Comunity Studies class at OAC. Keep writing :D