Early Bloom

Has spring come

so soon?

Your bare arms

stretching

through the winter breeze

 

upon which

white tears grow.

Reviews

[April Blue]

I really like the way this poem describes it self and the lovely words used.. I really love hte line, " White tears grow.."

[emmajoy]

How beautiful.. how unexpected.. a painting by words. Memorable.

[Matt_Penrose]

Thanks so much for your feedback emmajoy! I really must return to writing again. I miss it!