Revelation

O, stranger,

can you feel it?

 

Can you sense it

in the breeze?

 

Can you see it

in the trees?

 

See how the sun

greets us?

 

How its light

welcomes us?

 

It is a revelation

to our senses,

 

a new path

for us to take.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

One learns from surroundings, whether beautiful or dreary.. the first so obvious it can be taken forgranted at times.. the latter so demoralising one flies to that path to find something better.

Your words really do send the senses reeling. Light, sun.. inspiring, remind human beings to feel more than they did ten seconds before.

[Matt_Penrose]

Mightily appreciate the feedback! Indeed it was a time when I was beginning to look beyond myself and suddenly saw a world teeming with life. It was spring and it was as though I had never seen things so beautiful before. It really is a message to see beyond our own borders and take in the simple yet majestic beauty of nature about us.

[emmajoy]

' It really is a message to see beyond our own borders and take in the simple yet majestic beauty of nature about us.'

There's little better than that.. ..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

A beautiful and full of hope composition urging us to move forward to face the reality of life. Nice flow here :)

[Matt_Penrose]

Thank you!