Party

Got to high in the end.

Hanging out with your friend.

Drink a keg and smoke a joint.

Close your legs its rude to point.

 

Eating the brownied drugs.

Smell of s**t comes from the rugs.

A bit too young for this

But you gotta get fucked before you get fixed.

 

Gotta run from the cops.

Weeds been smoked. Pills been popped.

Flip off your parents and run away.

Find out your uncles gay.

 

Listening to your favorite band.

Dump your girl friend because shes bland.

You stay after last call.

Drinking in front of the mall.

 

Wake up at six AM.

You said Im worthless and I am.

Hung over in every way.

Cant wait to do it again the next day.

Reviews

[Kho-San]

I read this and I thought you were leading up to an ending which warned against those things, but it was certainly surprising that you in fact encouraged it (something which I don't agree with, but it's still quite funny) so yeah, the comedian in you popped up in this poem, and I DID laugh at many verses, but the last verse was by far the funniest.
Really good, a nice change from all the depressing poetry (which I write as well as everyone else)

[Jane Doe]

:) very funny I like it you got talent don't waste iron nights like that:)



Xoxoxo
~abbie
100/100

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very funny, love it!!

[PyroKitty24]

Well you don't see poems like this very often. The first stanza needs reread for mistakes, but besides that it was good. How interesting

[misha]

This is different and very interesting. I can see the humor in it. Great write.