Cries

Just something God gave me.

Hear my cries

For the end is near

You don't want to be left behind

For terrible times follow

Seven years of death by lies

Don't believe a word they say

Or eternity in the lake of fire,

Gods way is so much better 

life of happiness and joy

You and your family and friends

Living together in a new glorified body

With no temptation or hatred

With Jesus by your side, 

Now what do you say 

do you want to accept Jesus into your life

You want to be free from the bondage that holds you

God will never leave your side

Reviews

[Tabitha t]

very unique view. I enjoyed reading this. I almost wish it was longer with a bit more symbollism since you did so wonderfully on what you already had in this piece. But I like the point of view. And I almost want to put in a request for the opposing side.

[misha]

This is a great poem that speaks so loud and clear. Great job!!

[Black]

a powerfull poem

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and beautiful poem. I like the way you led the reader to a very strong ending. Good to hold faith and hope in your heart. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[GamingGal]

Sorry to say that I wasn't a fan of this. I mean, the poem itself is rather nice, but the subject matter digs into my core and tears me apart in a bad way. Not due to guilt or anything, but because I used to adore the church.....and then they found out I'm gay and shunned me pretty much. So, yeah, this poem brings up some bitterness.

Other than that, the symbolism is rather nice.

Oh, and "except" should be "accept"

[Midori]

very nice write, and so true! i enjoyed reading it.

[MandaBear]

Sounds really Good!