Someone New To Love

Just thought I would write something new....

The beauty of someone unknown

Looking into the distance not knowing what they will stumble upon

 

They see you for the first time

As our eyes meet and we exchange hellos

I can’t help but notice your beauty

That sways my heart to the other side

Just to get one more glance before you walk away 

Reviews

[GamingGal]

I've been in this position before: seeing someone and caring about them out of a single glance. Very good.

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Thanks Everyone for the reviews :)

Matthew Hardy

[Cancelled]

*LIKE*

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfectly simple, sweet and a little unfinished it seems, to em at least, well done, good read.

[misha]

This is simple and beautiful! Geat job!

[Sleepless]

welll im glad you had something to write for again . awesome poem !:) keep it up and keep writing :)

[Lindsey]

A kind image of the first touches of new love. :)

[freelancejouster]

i love the way that you conquered this poem. it's so easy, short and sweet. the one issue i would address is the inconsistancy of the pronouns. you switch from "they" to "we" to "you" and it's very distracting.

[Black]

it is a sincere work, with a wonderfull emotion which i hope everyone will feel once in their life

[Thea]

That is totally romantic...Your words are so sincere...So touching...The passion and love is perfectly expressed in this piece...Even the emotions are greatly crafted...Excellent work...
:)))