Still Winds

To someone I have just met......... <3

The beauty of not knowing your love

Has my mind wondering

Of the still wind that drives my heart

You are having those winds stir up inside me

Making me want you even more

Never before would I have guessed

That someone as beautiful as you

Would knock on my front door

The wind is coming faster than it has ever come before 

Reviews

[Summer D.]

This was a nice piece and I really liked the title. Just one line stood out like a sore thumb, "If you are having those winds stir up inside me." It seems... off. The line following that seemed a little raw for something that started out rather eloquent. I guess it's a stereotypical thought but... I would've appreciated something a little bit more subtle? I guess this is mainly emotional.. so the line fits. Last line was great.

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Thanks everyone for the reviews, I really think that this is one of my best poems that I have wrote so far. :) There are more to come...

Matthew Hardy

[BetanuZwei]

I loved the last line especially, really demonstrating the thrill of a new experience, and the uncertainty of what is to come.

[Lindsey]

I love the way this was written it is beautiful and makes people think more in a kind of peaceful way.

[Black]

a beautifull flow
and nice way of expressing

[freelancejouster]

line six: "guest" should be "guessed."
the last line is wonderful.

[Sleepless]

reading this i guess that girl has taken your heart :) im so happy for you wish you good luck and wish you the best :)

[RedInk524]

You better hope that those winds do not bring you a storm.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the hope and desire for more. No wasted words. Just a beautiful poem of hope and dreams. Need both to have a good life. A very good ending to excellent poem.
Coyote