You and Me

Someone I once loved...

My trust for you hasn’t vanished

But my love for you has come to a stop

The thought of being with you

Is no longer the scene

You broke my heart for the last time

No longer will I dream about you and me

If you finally decide you want to give me a chance

Too bad

I’m no one’s second choice 

Reviews

[Megan]

"I'm no ones second choice" if that isn't a smack in the face I don't know what is. I'm glad to see someone standing up for themselves. I wish I had the guts to do something like that but I'm too much of a hopeless romantic. Great write, amazing flow and a powerful ending! The second line was pretty much kick a*s too haha. Thanks for posting!

[Midori]

Wow I can tell you put your heart into this poem. It has a nice flow to it. Keep up the good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words. Hard to learn pain. Wise to know when to escape. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tyler Anthony Pletzke]

nice lovely poem man>> :)