Truth in You

To someone that I really like that doesn't really trust guys anymore and I'm trying to will her trust what you guys think?

I will wait for ever

For my trust in you to grow

The thought of being with you

Makes my heart grow

Side by side in my dreams

You and I walking down a sandy beach

Only in my dreams I win your trust

The change in days

Makes my heart wonder

What you’re thinking now

My heart is in anguish

For the day our eyes meet 

Once again

 

Reviews

[Megan]

I really loved this, it made me think about my own relationship and honestly made me a little jealous of the lucky girl you talk about. I wish my boyfriend was that attentive to my needs. I'm also sorry she thinks you don't have a chance with her..haha it's her loss.

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

I'm not giving it to her, because she already said I don't have any chance with her :(

[Ace D Portgas]

I think this is a sweet poem. I think a poem like this will swirl the lady too.

It has a nice flow and rhythm to it and I enjoyed reading it

But yes you should give it to her

[Sleepless]

aaaaaw!!!! this is really sweet of you !:) yeah ur doing the right thing love the poem !:)

[Black]

a nice poem,
and i think you mean win her trust,
i think love doesnt need persuasion, you trust someone or you dont,
time okay, but you cant win trust,

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

should i give it to her?

[confident woman]

This sounds like you are waiting patiently for the one you love to get through a rough time and come back to you? Continue to be hopeful. Good luck.