Truth in You

To someone that I really like that doesn't really trust guys anymore and I'm trying to will her trust what you guys think?

I will wait for ever

For my trust in you to grow

The thought of being with you

Makes my heart grow

Side by side in my dreams

You and I walking down a sandy beach

Only in my dreams I win your trust

The change in days

Makes my heart wonder

What you’re thinking now

My heart is in anguish

For the day our eyes meet 

Once again

 

Reviews

[Megan]

I really loved this, it made me think about my own relationship and honestly made me a little jealous of the lucky girl you talk about. I wish my boyfriend was that attentive to my needs. I'm also sorry she thinks you don't have a chance with her..haha it's her loss.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

I hear a song when I read this, good rhythm.

[Corkee1808]

This is really cute (:!

[Cancelled]

Wow. The girl you like is really missing out on a nice guy like you! But hey, love the poem, hope she and you have a future together with God's grace! :D

[BetanuZwei]

I can really feel your pain here, well done. Be patient and she will get there when she's ready! Until then keep dreaming and writing.

[Lindsey]

Beautiful and full of soul. I enjoyed it.

[Meghan]

Good poem. The girl doesn't realize what she's missing. I hope it sorts itself out, and she learns to trust.

[Joe Shetina]

Love your poem, love the message.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good things are worth waiting for. A poem with a good message. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Midori]

vary nice I like it.