Distant Love

The reflection of being so far away

From somebody like you

My heart cries out

For the day our eyes meet once more

I can’t tell you I adore you

I’m frightened of what you might feel

Turning away among not looking back

Tears my mind to imagine we are close to each other

Knowing it’s a lie  

Walking in that packed area the first time

Simply seeing you

In the midst of your beauty that stands out

Reviews

[Seashell]

wawww this is so romantic..If all men thought like this and could put pen to paper, as you have here...all gf/bf hiccups would be resolved...instantly...quite simply because it says it all..All that has to be said...
Thank you so much for share
Will read more of your work 2moro night...About to head home after nightshift... zzz z zzz
Babs xo

[Black]

a nice poem ,
though i cant relate,
it is well thought

[Coyote Poetry]

Distance can make the heart grow stronger? A wise person don't allow distance to destroy a dream. A beautiful poem with a hopeful story in the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

Wow, this was beautiful and sad at the same time. You never really get to see these type of writes from a guy's point of view and I really really liked it. It was written wonderfully, great job as always.
♥ Ta'Shandra